Pros:

DId you get valve to help you on this?

This map has some of the best detail I have ever seen in custom maps. 

I loled at the pacman machine. to bad you cant play it.

Your own crecendo events make it seem as if its a officaly map.

Cons:

None.

Conclusion:

As said in pros, It might as well have been made by  valve it self. I love the police station click it or ticked posters.