Pros:

It's easy to see this is made by someone who knows what they're doing in Hammer.
Very well-detailed, immersive, realistic environments.
Interesting idea with the church.
Good fun to play.

Cons:

Fairly short.
I cannot play the last level as it crashes on me, although I suspect this is Valve's doing since the same has happened on the final Sacrifice level ever since it has existed.

Conclusion:

A fun campaign to play through; a shame I can't get to the end, but what I have played through is very promising. Possibly a tad generic and a little short, but not at all bad.

Pros:

Definitely a Valve-standard campaign
Environments very well-made
Good level of difficulty - usually Normal is too easy for me, this time it was bang-on
Interesting format of finale

Cons:

Message at the beginning saying "Water is poisonous!" - is there a more subtle way of indicating this rather than a plain text message?
In a couple of areas I got slightly lost, but there was a lot of sunlight on my computer screen :P

Conclusion:

99% for the very nit-picky reason of the water danger message at the beginning - I believe that with a little creativity it could be shown that the water is dangerous without making it as obvious as a screen popup.

I think there was something else I picked up while playing, but I can't remember what it was so it can't be that important. :P

Overall, this campaign is on-par with official Valve ones. Considering it utilises the Passing music/weapons, I actually think it's a better quality campaign than the Passing is and would much rather play this one (plus it doesn't crash me like the Passing finale does).

Pros:

Great design and style
Good gameplay balance
Routes between carriers work well

Cons:

Sometimes puts my FPS down more than other maps (but that's not saying much TBH)

Conclusion:

This map is regularly voted in on the No Heroes CTF Heaven server (I'm assuming it's the same version), one of my favourite haunts, and it's great fun. The style is certainly different from other maps and it makes for interesting game play, especially for airblast Pyros such as myself. ;)