Pros:

-very clever
-Feels like a maze or puzzle
-I particularly enjoyed the rooftops, Very large
-Dark skybox gives a really urgent feel to the level

Cons:

-could use some work on ammo pile locations (Too far apart)
-The actual roof part of the rooftops felt empty, could use some items on top
-At the very beginning, i Have restarted over and over, but it always kills ellis for me before you can do anything, so you play the first chapter with three players.

Conclusion:

I think it's got some way to go, but all campaigns start from somewhere. this one is definitely going places, I can't wait to see where this map goes, it could be really great, possibly as good as an official campaign! Cold Stream was pretty bad, and now it's finished and looks good. This map, i can see, is already ahead of where that map came from. I know that this map -with required revisions- is going to be fairly popular community-wise :D

Pros:

-sweet Icons
-custom names
-Fits nicely in game

Cons:

-though it fits nicely, the model for rochelle could be a female anarchist to match the default voices

Conclusion:

Allover EXTREMELY good set of skins for a zombie Apocalypse. 

Pros:

-I like the elevator at the beginning.
-Love the custom sounds.
-Like the voice!
-the factory museum part was intriguing.
-the light and sky was different than the usual gameplay styles you see. 

Cons:

-I know it's beta, but it could use more detail in buildings (textures and materials).
-very blocky, lots of just big chunks :/
-needs a better alert for when the horde starts.
-Not a usual complaint, but the saferoom has too many items. (no points deducted about that :] ).

Conclusion:

I do believe you  could, over time, mold this into an interesting campaign. it will take a good amount of time and lots of planning, voicing over, things like that. but it will work! I personally would appreciate some point in the campaign a Gauntlet Crescendo event (where you run to the end to turn a switch off {Like in the mall of Dead Center, or the Roller Coaster of Dark Carnival}). Anyways, it was an okay mission to play, but It can be adapted to be better.

Pros:

-Simplistic design
-Easily fits the model of hunter

Cons:

-Doesn't QUITE fit the tone of the game, but hey, it's a mod so that's what a lot of them do. (no real points taken)

Conclusion:

Overall, a good hunter Model that could also be used as a Common Infected if you have the time to make that too. If it is made I'll download that too.