Pros:

+GREAT detail
+Awesome, unique intro
+Great Panic Events
+Great finale
+Good path layout

Cons:

-The windows on the security booth on the first map before you enter the storage room from the loading docks, turns checkered if you shoot them

Conclusion:

Great map! So fun to play! You are either a really good mapper, or you are secretly a valve member XD

Pros:

-GREAT detail
-good lighting
-GREAT path to get away from tanks
-Everything matches the environment
-GREAT navigation meshes

Cons:

Really? they make me put cons? i cant find a con. :)

Conclusion:

GREAT map i love it.  You are going to be GREAT. make more maps and send me a message when they come out. :)