Pros:

-Great design and texturing
-Better animations
-Appropriate sounds

Cons:

-Weak melee animation

Conclusion:

Better than the original design in every way. The weak melee is part in parcel of using a pre-existing design.

Pros:

-Nice lighting and mood with music and weather
-Love the environment, especially at the start.
-Relative scarcity of supplies is well balanced to challenge players to be conservative with them
-Good length
-Good mix of outside and inside combat
-Appropriate placement of dialogue and comments

Cons:

Error icons (listing what I remember):
-Part 2: 1 near the dead paratrooper and 2 not far from the cabins.
-Part 3: 1 in the building shortly after Zoey's comment about train yards
-Part 4: 3 surrounding the mortar on the train car

The building covering the generator just outside the door that spawns the tank was bright purple and black

The music they plays at the start of each part will distort sometimes while playing.

Recommend 4 pistols at the beginning instead of 3

Conclusion:

This is a great map design with a few bugs as listed. That was the extent of the issues I had.

Pros:

-Excellent paint job, I really Like the pattern on the left    side
-The sound replacement gives the impression of extremely high stopping power
-Very good texture work. It looks great even on the lowest quality settings.

Cons:

-The reload animation seems to run just barely faster than the actual time taken for reloading, which can be a little annoying if you swap weapons quickly when the gun appears to be done reloading when it isn't.

Conclusion:

I love it. This thing beats out the default Combat Rifle in every aspect. I like how despite it being in Rarity's style, the gun isn't ridiculously fancy.