Pros:

Great Campaign Length
Good Map Variation
Inventive Finale with Great Sunrise Setting

Cons:

First Map is Too Long

Conclusion:

First map could easily be split into 2 to help counter the difficulty spot with the alarm, however, the car alarm next to the minigun is a nice touch (I always forget and hit that damn thing). 

Overall this is an excellent campaign, probably my favourite custom campaign yet, and I've recommended and played through it with friends a number of times. 

Excellent work, I hope you release another campaign.