Pros:
- College campus idea is a cool idea, that's what made me download the map. - The first breaking floor thing was unexpected and a nice touch. - Details on the buildings are good.
Cons:
- The breaking walls look very cheap. - Too many hordes, and they can spawn right on top of you. - No direction to the finale trigger. - Cut scenes were annoying, unnecessary, and made people crash often. - Too many tanks. - The map just isn't long enough to be a campaign. The only way to win is to rush. - First area is too open, and most of the detail work just isn't done yet.
Conclusion:
As a TF2 mapper who's never dared to touch L4D2 authoring tools, I can say that you're well on your way to making some good maps in the future. We didn't like this one, but that was mostly because it obviously isn't finished yet. I'd suggest, given its length, that you go the direction of Helm's Deep, a staged survival map. That would work great with this layout. Keep at it, I can't wait to see this map in the future!
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