Pros:

+ The game runs and did not once crash for me.
+ Playable on lower difficulty's.
+ Textured and a somewhat decent bot nav.
+ I guess I could count that it has proper lighting to an extent.

Cons:

I am not even sure where to start, this just has so many problems.

- No dialogue between the survivors.
- In map 1 as you start the ambiance is sewer ambiance while walking above the ground in a train yard? What?
- Just plain, empty houses. 
- Extreme lack of Molly, pipes, and bile. And by lack of I mean none at all.
- Almost no pills and Adren even though you give us 2x the amount of health packs at times. 
- The endless hordes that continue to keep going in maps 1, 2, and 3 even when you hit the button to call them off.
- Wireframes.
- The huge amounts of unnecessary mazes that seem like they are only put there to make your map look bigger.
- The chopper in map 3 that is pretty much frozen in flight mode till it magically just starts up and then leaves? What is the point with that chopper?
- Vast landscapes that have nothing and serve no purpose opposed to, once again, make your map seem longer. It's just repetitive. 
- Specials got stuck often.
- The red and blue trucks in map 2 or 3, I forget which, that also have red and blue tires.
- Lack of melee weapons after the 1 katana in map 1.
- This random as can be bright light in the sewers that is 8x the brightness of all the other ones, this was my favorite.
- The ending was dull, boring, and confusing. 
- The ladder to leave for the chopper just moved on its own, slowly. It looks ridiculous. 
- The way up the ladder is confusing. Not only do Tanks and hordes spawn on the way up the ladder, but you have a completely useless path in front of the ladder making people think that is the way to go when really you need to turn around to the other side. Atleast give a prompt to point people in the correct direction.
- Saferooms are just wrong and hints that would only prompt when at an end saferoom prompts themselves at the beginning.
- No tier 1's on map 1 or 2 but you gave them to us on map 3?
- The buttons for the gauntlets are just... so weirdly placed that it makes no sense as to why they would be there in the first place. Maps need to make some sense in there surroundings.

Conclusion:

All in all... No. Just no. 

This campaign has to many problems that cancel out the pro's. You state that this is the final version but it looks to be an early Alpha at best. It needs a serious revamp if its to get a bump in ratings on this site. You honestly just need to take it down and work on it till its better. Think about adding in more props or things to do in maps 1 and 2. The maze thing that makes your campaign seem abit longer is boring, not special, and definitely not unique. Put props in your houses so they are not plain old empty dark rooms. 

 I don't like having to bash peoples work and like the guy before me said, if it was still in beta I would give this some serious le-way. But its not, so it does not get any simpathy from me. =L Please rethink this campaign out because it does have some potential. 

Edit: I am going to update this and give it a slightly better score due to L4DTeak making a good case, and you added an intro. But the author really should give this another look, despite not maping anymore.

Pros:

+ Custom Music
+ The plane was a good idea!
+ Loved the environment.
+ There were no skybox textures from what I could tell.
+ Supplies in the first 2 maps were just right for the length of them.
+ The finale was a great idea!

Cons:

- The bot's NAVs were not really that great. Bot's flew off the ice and decided they would not move.
- The ending was a good idea, but the fireworks NEED to have a re-spawn. If you were to accidently shoot a create full of them, you would have to restart. 
- Lack of Mollys!!!!
- I found a HUGE amount of chargers, not sure if you put them in or the director just hated me today so I wont take any point off for that. 

Conclusion:

Very, very nice campaign. Was my favorite ot of all the entries for the contest! I have had my eye on this one for awhile and as soon as I saw it released I knew we had to try it. Hope to see more from you!

~GFJasonX

Pros:

+Good fun, especially with friends.
+Custom music
+The puzzles are amazing!
+Random witch event's made to scare people
+The loud Roars in the background kept everyone on edge
+The boss of course!
+Alot to explore!
+The laser is not a insta death! THANK GOD! That was my biggest flaw in L4D1!

Cons:

With every map come the cons.

-Sometimes the infected looked really laggy. It did not have anything to do with my server or internet connection, they just looked laggy for some reason.
- It was alittle bit to easy for L4D2, seemed like it was more of a challange for l4D1. Though, that could just be that me and my team have gotten better so I will not count any points for that!

Conclusion:

Sorry I did not review this sooner, I thought I did lol.

I love this map! It will forever be one of my favorites. It was the FIRST custom that me and my team ever did together, and seeing it for L4D2 and being able to play it again was a real treat! I did not play it with bots so I am not sure how they would have reacted, though I am not sure this is the type of campaign that you can count bots twords being helpful.  Again, it seemed eaiser than the first time we played it for L4D1 almost 2 years ago, but I think that we went up a notch so I don't think thats to much of a problem. Very nice campaign my friend! 

Hope to see more from you!

~ GFJasonX

Pros:

~The gnome of course!
~Map layouts were well put together.
~I did not get one hint of fps lag
~Everything was textured correctly and cubemaps were nice.

Cons:

~Ammo, you gave us barley anything in the first 3 chapters. But in the last chapter, there were 3-4 of them.
~Our game ended as soon as we hit the radio. Needs to be fixed.
~Bot's were alittle... wacky, but they were decent so not to big of a con.
~Hordes were alittle long.

Conclusion:

Overall it was a really good campaign. I was really happy to play it. The gnome was amazing, easily the best thing in the campaign. Even though I hated that gnome since it came out lol. Very good my friend. Hope to see more from you!

~GFJasonX

Pros:

~ You had a Intro!
~Amazing ship and maps
~It was fun and surprising everywhere we went!
~We did not encounter any glitches 
~There were no texture errors 
~FPS sayed really nice. never dropped below 30 even with all the zombies
~Last boss = Awesome!
~Had fun time with the worm boss thing lol
~All in all it was a SUPER awesome map for this series.

Cons:

~ The biggest con I can think of... was that there were just way to many zombies. Because of all of them we died on easy once and they helped out abit on the last boss. 
~ I would not mind the zombies to to much if you supplied more health for the ending. Once at the last boss we would run dry of health so quick it was hurtful to watch. 
~ I would have liked to hear some more talking between the survivors.

Conclusion:

All in all, GREAT map! Just as good as Wormwood and Space Jockey's. I think the zombies need to be toned down just a tad but thats about it in my book. I never tried it out with bots. But I dont really see how they could help in a map like this so its ok. I don't take  points off for that. Our video review will be out soon! Hope to see more from you!

Best map in the contest! Hope you win!

Pros:

- Giant bosses were freaking awesome!
- Loved the layout of the whole thing. Nice to see something that kinda looks like mob stadium to finish off a series. 
- Puzzle was great, I liked the finding pieces thing.
- Weapons were nicely placed. Can take awhile to find the right door but worth it in the end. 
- The most epic thing in this was the ending boss. He was awesome. I was not expecting something so huge. 
- We are in the credits =D!

Cons:

- As normal the bots are useless, but you can't do anything about that so its fine. 
- I wish at the beginning you put out a ammo pile. We ran outta ammo quick with all the zombies and trying to shoot the eyes. 
- Not everyone was healed when we placed the pieces in, not sure if that was intentional.

Conclusion:

Where is all the reviews for this map? Especially since space jockeys was such a hit. Anyway, we REALLY enjoyed this map. Fantastic ending to a awesome trilogy of maps. I will rate this a 94 because there is always room for improvement. Its best to play this on easy, this was to be expected aswell. But even on easy its hard so it does not really matter. I''ll have our video of it out some time soon.

Please if you can create more maps. Your ideas are just awesome and you really do make some of the best maps. 

Pros:

+The Atmosphere
+The Custom models and posters
+The Custom Sounds
+The Crane lift and the puzzles to solve it
+The Music
+Did not have ANY bot errors or zombies errors so the NAV was very well done.
+ Difficultly was spot on (atleast for advanced.)
+That was the best ending I have ever seen!
+Did not see outside the map or any Skybox errors

Cons:

-I personally don't like the day time effect. But thats just me, I wont take anything off for that.
-A few tanks in the finale would die before we even got to see it.

Conclusion:

A year of being in beta did indeed pay off. This had the most epic atmosphere and the best ending I have seen in both Left 4 Dead 1 and Left 4 Dead 2. Amazing, amazing job. I hope to see more from you guys! And as they said, make a L4D2 version!

Pros:

~Dark and Creepy forest.
~The look and feel of the House was Amazing.
~Custom Textures are a A++
~Custom Sounds worked great
~Feels like a Halloween like map witch is so awesome because there is not any out there.
~Flying books
~I liked the ending
~I did not get any FPS issues
~Could not see into the skybox
~Navs worked well
~Zombies spawns were really good

Cons:

~Fireplace in the Mansion was missing but I think you know that.
~Throught my playthough the only thing wrong with the bots was that they would not pick up health and items.
~Other than that nothing. 

Conclusion:

Omg you are a god. Forever I have been wanting a campaign thats more like a Halloween one. No one and I mean NO ONE has givin something like this out. I know what Night Terror was and how good it is but this tops it hands down. Thank you so much for something like this dude. PLZ do more because we need more Halloween like things In a Zombie game.

Pros:

~Good layout
~Its like a mix of No Mercy and The Passing at times witch is really good
~Nice use of lighting and color changing (Though personally I don't like it that much, but I wont take points off for that.)
~Could not see into the skybox
~Not to confusing to tell where to go
~Love chapter 3
~ I did not get any frame rate issues

Cons:

~Map 1 was WAY to short
~Map 2 was WAY to long 
~Tier 2 Weapons did not show up till map 3 I think witch is not to much of a con
~Not enough health packs for people who Advanced/Expert.
~I had a problem with the ending finale. When we hit the button and started running up the building the horde did not come. Making it to easy. But the second it said Rescue has arrived get aboard. Then it said that we needed to make it to the top and that the horde was finally coming.

Conclusion:

Over all it was a really well done campaign and me and my friends enjoyed it. I could not tell you if there was any errors with bots or not because we played all human but the zombies acted fine. 

I really think that you should give some of chapter 2 to chapter 1 because it was just way to short and the 2nd was just way to long. Also just in case that ending was not just me. Then you need to fix that. But if its just me then for get about it. 
Hope to see more from you soon!

Pros:

-I love the lighting effects!
-I could not find any nav errors or anything like that
-Could not see outside the map.
-Area was well thought out and looked just like a broken down military base.
-I Loved the finale, it was abit to easy but it was really good.
-There were places that things were that you did not expect them to be witch was kind of cool.
-Tanks/ Witches were nicely spread out. 
-We would LOVE to see a squeal to this! It would be cool to be on like a planet or something.

Cons:

-There were times that we needed ammo when there was not any.
-Starting the campaign I died right as the opening happened. (A simple restart fixed that though)
- There should be at the very least a second pistol at the beginning. It gets a little hard. 
-Lack ammo/Health/Weapons at the end. 

Conclusion:

All in all this was a fantastic campaign! VERY different and thats what makes it cool. I love the lighting/alien effect and thats what makes this campaign stand out from the rest. I know what  Bindal said but don't take that out. The finale was just as great, though it was a little easy. But me and my friends had a good time here and will be posting our play through of it soon to YouTube. I will be sure to add a link and your name as author.

Keep up the good work and hope to see more from you!

PS, Thank you for making this a l4d1 map! People seem to have forgotten it lately and as much as I love two, I think one should be getting just a few things. So thanks!

Pros:

~ Probably the most creative map that was ever made for this game. 
~The most fun me and my team had in awhile.
~ Excellent use of textures.
~The sounds were right on time and fantastic.  
~The end run was epic.
~Bots stayed with us in the one with the zombies.
~No detectable skybox glitches. 
~Almost perfect.

Cons:

~ The wheel was kind of pink while glowing.
~Was just a tad to easy.
~When playing free ride the bots did not follow. Not sure if thats how its suppose to be or not though. 

Conclusion:

Over all this is the best map out if you just want to have a good time. Very creative and from the looks of it your worked your butt off to make it.Excellent excellent map and I hope to see more from you. 

Pros:

~Great port from Hl2. 
~You kept most of Ravenholm in this map witch is good.
~Bots Nav was good, they stayed with the group pretty well. 
~Weapons where nicely placed. 
~No missing Textures
~Good Clean fun!

Cons:

~The running to the train kart in map 3. Its not bad, but the amount of Zombies makes Expert unplayable. We barley made it on Advanced. 
~I liked the port you made for the first game better

Conclusion:

Overall a awesome port from one awesome game to the next. Ravenholm was my fav part from Hl2 witch is always a plus. I am sorry to say I liked your port for the first game a bit better but this one still rocks.

Hope to see more from you!

Pros:

~Maps where nice and a decent length. 
~I love the whole ending. 
~Bot's kept with me and did not get stuck on anything.
~The ammo and stuff was well spread out.
~There were not any glitches or areas you could see the skybox.
~Lots of fun!

Cons:

~As much as I love the ending, there is no way in hell you can do that ending on expert. You throw hordes upon hordes on the run there. But we barley had anything on the way back because the zombies all spawned behind us. 

Conclusion:

Try to spread the zombies in the end a bit more. I noticed all the health and stuff, but it does not do you any good if your under attack by a billion zombies. Remember on expert it only takes 5 hits to go down. Not enough time to heal.

I have been watching this campaign for a really long time and am happy to see it get done so well for one of the 2 games. Your a great mapper and I hope to see more from you.

Pros:

~Absolutely awesome
~Good environment
~Just as epic as it was in l4d1
~My fps were not to bad
~Still love the Tanker Ship
~Could not see any edges of the map or the skybox
~Bots where doing ok except for the 3rd map at the end.

Cons:

~I don't like the final. It DOES require team work and if you don't have a mic or bots to follow you it can get abit hard. 
~Bots got stuck on the end of map 3 for some reason. Took him awhile to teleport back. 
~To many events and they seem to just not stop when they start. 

Conclusion:

Fantastic map and your an awesome map maker. The atmosphere was just incredible. I think that finale needs some work though. All in all I hope to see some more work for you bro. 

Pros:

Very well made! I felt Like I was playing a almost pro campaign! 

- Love the acting
- Fire on the buildings was great
- Levels were interesting
- Tank was awesome
- love the random screaming in the b/g

Cons:

- To many Jokeys and Chargers (There were very little of anything else)
- Bots would not pick up health packs and at time would not pick up ammo and were left with pistols only
- The tank skin apples to ALL campaigns you do
- The ending needs work! If you wait by the chopper then the zombies only come from one way and it makes it WAY to easy even on Expert.

Conclusion:

This was very well done and deserves first place in that contest. Download this map FOR SURE!!!

Its so good I am going to post a walkthrough on youtube! Keep up the good work!